This is excellent. Please do this one, with the word mistake the same width as the Really Dumb (the way it used to be) you may have to make 10 larger or move it down. Thanks
The space that every single word is occupying is different because they don't have the same number of letters. If i make them the same width the word (mistakes) will look tiny and (dumb) huge compare to the rest. I hope that this make sense.
Sorry to ask you to go back to this. But I think the way the words here: "Really Dumb Mistakes" all the same width may be better. Please do this design, with the 10 in black and put in the Shmuz logo above and the rest of the cover below as you the full 6" x 9" cover. Thanks
This is very good. I'm, getting some feedback about the word "Dumb" being too strong. we want to play that down. Can you stry that in a weaker font. maybe a thinner font, or a script?
I sent a file to your name that should show you exactly what I mean I want the entire logo all the words of it smaller the 10 really dumb mistakes are very smart couples make all of it should be 80%
The 10 RDM logo is the entire logo. All the words: "The 10 Really dumb Mistakes that Very Smart Couples Make". Keep it in the same proportions as you had it before. Just shrink it to make some white space on the cover. I'm going to upload a mockup to your name.
Please don't change the fonts at all. Just take the exact logo as it is and shrink it down try it at 80% and let's see how it looks I know that there'll be white space on on the left and the right That's fine
It's still too crowded. 1.Please move the Shmuz logo up a little bit and make it still a little smaller. 2. Make the RDM logo smaller. 3. Move Rabbi Ben Tzion Shafier further down
It looks way to crowded. Please do the following: 1. Shmuz logo much smaller. 2. Delete the "Because the way you think..." 3.10 RDM logo make a little bit smaller. 4. Name Rabbi Ben Tzion Shafier, smaller.
The red outline is to saw you the 6" x 9" dimensions. i 've aded the logo and the slogan in two lines on the top. Also the rest of the details at the bottom. I 'll wait for your comments.
Let's leave it like this with only the word "Very" in a different color. I would like to see different colors for that word. It looks like a different shade of green might work but please try a number of colors thanks
I don't like this green. We need either a different green or another color. I would also like to see how it looks with the word really in the same other color.
This looks great. I would like to see it 1 with the word mistakes on its own line . Version 2. The same as you have it here with the number 10 in black
This looks very sharp. Could you please put the word the off to the left of center and the word make off the right off center I think would add some more balance to this
Also please try it without any script fonts. The weight of the words you have in script now is good
D I would like to see them in a different non script font. Probably a liteeiggt sans serif.
I like this a lot . The part I'm not sure about is the word couples. The script font looks nice but is harder to read. Please make another version trying that in a different font. But otherwise this is very good
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i removed the (THE) and moved the Rabbi down. I 'll wait for your comments.
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this is based on your comment at #234
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I 'll send as soon as possible.
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I 'll wait for your comments.
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I 'll send as soon as possible.
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i 'll send some variations as soon as possible.
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different font comcination. I 'll wait for your comments.
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i 'll send as soon as possible.
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i 'll send as soon as possible.
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D I would like to see them in a different non script font. Probably a liteeiggt sans serif.
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