The ShmuzLogo Design Contest

Hi Barry,

I am happy to make revision, but in this phase only 1st rank designer can submit the revision. Except you give me opportunity to me, with switch the 1st rank.

Regards,
Jefry

But one thing: Please put the Mistakes on a full line like the other ones. If you can keep it as crisp as this that would be great.

This looks crisper. I would like to see one version with the 10 in black. And another version with the word "Very" in a color, maybe green? or some other color. Thanks you

Hi Barry Shafier,

Update proposal #185 and #186

Regards,
Jefry

Hi Barry Shafier,

Thanks for feedback update proposal :
- #175 the and make in left and right side, very smart in two color and really in black
- #176 same with #175 but "really" in red
- #177 "the and make" in left and right side, really in black, and very smart in two color
- #178 same with #177, but very smart in black/single color

Regards,
Jefry

This looks great. I would like this version with the word "the" to the left and "make" to the right

Hi Barry Shafier,

Thanks for feedback, update proposal :
- #167 make the and make align to left and right, change the really in red, add space between very and smart.
- #169 same with entry #167 but in different lines in "the" and "make"
- #173 same with entry #168, but very smart in black.

Regards,
Jefry

Hi Barry Shafier,

Thanks for feedback, update proposal base on feedback in entry #156 :
- #168 add space between very smart
- #170 add space between very smart and make really in red
- #171 add space between very smart and turn to black, with really in red.
- #172 add space between very smart and turn to black
Let me know your thoughts.

Regards
Jefry

can you do this with the words very smart having a space between them. And also the word make in black

I would like to see two things. 1. What this looks like with the word "Really" in red. 2. What this looks like with the word "The" off center to the left, and the word "Make" off center to the right.

Hi Barry Shafier,

Beside update #151 #152 and #153, I am 4th option #156, let me know your thoughts.

Regards,
Jefry

Hi Barry Shafier,

Thanks for feedback, sorry for late response last feedback received 01.00AM in my country. Update proposal with make "mistake" bigger and in one line, I make 3 option #151 #152 and #153, let me know your thoughts.

Regards,
Jefry

I would like to see this with the word mistake on the full line looking much bigger. That is a key phrase that I would like to stand out

Hi Berry Shafier,

Update proposal base on entry #58, make other version. I try to make top part and bottom part balance #98, let me know your thoughts,

Regards,
Jefry

Hi Berry Shafier,

Thanks for feedback, update proposal #97 make mistakes under the 10.

Regards,
Jefry

Another idea: if you put mistakes on a line by itself under the 10. So the 10 will become smaller and the word Mistakes will be very strong

This is good, but it looks to typical. Too balanced. Not raw enough

This is very good. I wonder if we can make it even stronger. Please keep this version and try other variations of it. Thanks

Hi Berry Shafier,

Thanks for feedback, update proposal #58 #59 #60 and #61, let me know your thoughts.

Regards,
Jefry

It's strong which is very good. The word "Make" is lost, putting it in reverse makes it seem like its not part of the sentence.

This is very good. Please leave it as is and create another version where the top part is stronger than the bottom. Right now this is very balanced, the Really Dumb Mistakes is the same weight as the very smart couples. I would like to see the Really Dumb Mistakes larger and the very smart smaller

Hi....

Thanks for feedback, update proposal #51 revise the typo "mistake" to be "mistakes" and "couple" to be "couples"

Regards,
Jefry

And its "Couples"

Let's keep to strong fonts. no playful or drawing font. And It's "Mistakes" Thanks

I like this basic idea. please make it "Mistakes"

Greetings...

I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, don't hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful

Regards
Jefry