#26 - Could you remove the line after "the" and please make the round trip thinner and more whimsical like. Can the collective word be straight and not lined up with moons.
#11 take away the designs around "the". Change round trip font to match the collective font. We like the thiner style font. remove the lines. But we like the circle shape :) Thanks!
Hi! Thanks a lot for the feedback. Please check my latest revisions #34 and #35 from my entry 26 with removed line of "the" , also made the font thinner. Also please check #36 from my entry #11 without the design around "the", made the font thinner. Actually "RoundTrip" and collective fonts are the same but I stretch the roundtrip. I put it back to normal. I hope that you like overall of my revisions. I hope there is improvement. If you want any changes, please do not hesitate to ask. God bless you!