I like this design but the tent looks a little too abstract and I would like the design to have more of a "retro elegant" feel to it. Also, I do not care for the stars.
I like this design however I would like the contrast turned down a bit - the tent looks a little like mountains with snowcaps. I would like the title contrast to be turned up a bit and be more pronounced. I also like the font you used in the previous submission #23. Thank you so much and I hope this helps.
Interesting design entry #31. Perhaps I could view it without the two inner tracings in the front tent (our maybe just leave one) remove the inner tracing on the background tents and fade both of them out just a bit...
Thank you ! I appreciate your time and effort ! Would it be possible to see entries 30,32 and 36 with an embellishment of some kind under the new years eve - hyde park villiage line. Also, is it possible to make the tent look a little less bold or thick in outline ? I am looking for ways to make these designs look and feel a bit more feminine and elegant.
Thank you for the feedback. I would be happy to provide some revisions on the designs, but I would need to be moved into the 1st position temporarily in order to do that.
I really like the new tent structure. (entries 62-67) but they look a little Aladdin like with the stars and star pattern. I like the others ranked in the contest that have fireworks in the background and the suggestion of stars. Also, I really like the embellishment in the middle of the line. I like the layout of the title of the event, however I think the font used in 65,66,and 67 is a bit too much. On the other hand I think the font used in 62 is too masculine. Lastly, I need to have the website listed also (www.therooftopeve.com)