This comment is referring to entry # 3 from 42 Studio
I appreciate your time coming up with this initial design and I like the clean elegant feel.
Couple of comments are that the tent I would like to incorporate is a "big tent" cirque style - with large peaks and valleys, and I do not think that the current reference to the tent is right. Perhaps then the stars could be removed from the sides of the rooftop eve and an embellishment could be placed on the peak of the tent.
I also like the way rooftop is pronounced, however it may look a bit less corporate and more soiree like if it were emphasized with a font that has more frill to it...
I would like to steer the design toward a more "vintage" and "classic" feel in an attempt to make it feel more upscale, bespoke and less corporate.
Thank you for this new design. I really like the new design, however I feel like the design feels too much like a circus and no indication of rooftop symbolism. I would like it to be a little more sophisticated with a elegant retro feel.
Hi Darin Please check my new entrys, I tried to add more retro feel by experimenting with old-style fonts, also added rooftop perspective symbol. #39 — #47
Thank you ! I really like these new entries ! Will you please show me entries # 41,42,44 & 47 with a website address included on the ? www.therooftopeve.com
Hi Here are updated logos #56 — #61. With site address bottom of logo becomes more heavy, so in some logos I have removed separated stripes to make it lighter. Thanks
I really like this design. I prefer the design wiithout the blue at the top of the tent. I also prefer the fireworks that illumina designed in her entry #55. I would like the design to have one line under the rooftop eve and then no lines under hyde park or the website address. I do like how you made the website less prominent. Thank you so much for your continued effort !