#50, 51 - We like these but would like to see maybe a few other options from you. Would like the "T" in "the" capitalized. This is a classy look to us.
#52 and 53 - Like these too. Any chance on getting a few other creative variations of these regarding different fonts on the "The" and "of greater tulsa". Not trying to be picky just looking for options.
#70, 71, 72, 73 - we like these but right now I'm just commenting quick my time is about up. Since you are in the top 5 I'll be able to work with you more over the next couple of days.
Would like to see an option where the "of greater tulsa" is spread out under the whole "Rock".
Would also like to see what it would look like if we were to separate the O and C. I like the look together but I have other people in the decision process and we would like to see it separate. It would be nice to see it in a color that pops a little more. Maybe even just Black.
I like the line your tracking on. My number one ranking is with you and/or variations of the same one. Was wondering if you have any other options to submit besides variations of the same one. Don't get me wrong I like that one but would just like more options if possible.
Will do Tulsaapostle... Will have some other design/s in the morning.... We have an 8 hour time difference so you might expect more designs in your morning.
Will continue to work on the revisions you asked for, but, late last night i had a revelation. By using the same concept with the O and C letter.... here i've made the
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#84 - not a big fan of the ichthus. I appreciate you sharing your revelation with me though. I would still like to see this design with the O and C separated. And maybe one without the line under it. I am a big fan of the O and C together but others want to see some different options. I would also like to see it in Maybe black or some color.
#88 and 89 - We don't like the abstract art on these. As for abstract art I was looking for something that represented people or families. Not sure if you have the time or if its worth your time to do something like that. I haven't re-ranked any of them because they are all variations of the same one is some way. However, this is the design or variation of one that we are most leaning to.
#87 - Is the one I'm leaning to the most. Is it possible to see it with a few variations. Variation 1) I would like to see this one again with the line under it 2) a variation with the O and C seperated 3) Would like to see if the "h" in "The" can be shortened. That is not go up so high and curve to the right. Sorry to be so picky thanks for all your help.
#92 - I think is my favorite now. Can we make another small adjustment? Can you shorten the length of the curl on the "K" in "ROCK"? More like the one in #52. I like the curl in the "R" better in that one too even though they are not much different.
I know that we are narrowing this thing down but is there any chance you have other ideas outside this thought pattern. I looked at your portfolio probably a little late and can see some awesome creativity. Not that what you have done is not awesome I would have liked a few more options. The prize we set may not warrent that much participation. However, if there is any chance of getting a few more options even though I may go with the current one I would like to see some. I like the idea of some abstract figure, art or something representing people or family. Where the logo can be used with or without the picture art. I liked one you did for Visionary Corps where it had the name below in some modern look but also had a picture above.
It may be too late but I'm just now getting the hang of this and understanding what I want as the time begins to run out. I appreciate all that you have done and will do.
I extended this phase for one more day. I am just getting the hang of this and finally feel like I am communicating the way I wanted to. The extension is just for the top 5 designers of which two of yours is in my top 5. I appreciate all you are doing to communicate with me and help me. Just you and one other is even attempting to help me and for that I am truly thankful. Because of when I started it would end in the morning and I need some time to allow me to get some input from some other people. Thanks again.
would still like to see the one ranked #1 with a shortened curl on the bottom of the "K". More like the one in #52. I love this classy look but if you would like to submit any other ideas with some abstract art I uploaded some pictures of two ways or ideas that I was thinking. You may or may not want to put any more time into this. Thanks for all your communication.
This is my job Tulsaapostle... This is what i do for a living, and, when having such a good client as yourself who leaves such feedback... well all i can say is...i wish i had more of people like you. Revision are unlimited.... ask away!
I love these designs but I'm going to move some of them to the non interested spot. Not because I don't like them but I want to keep the ones I like more in a smaller group. I'm looking at too many.
#110 - help me understand the picture. I don't know if it represents anything in your mind or not. I was thinking it may be like a husband holding a wife holding a baby. I may be looking way to much into it but wondered what was your intent. I like the concept even if that wasn't your intent. Not sure if I told you but I had uploaded some abstract figures to my profile of figures representing people or family. Thanks again!
Can you do #52 with the font of #92 in the "The" and "of Greater Tulsa". I like the font of "Rock" in #52 a little better than that in #92 but I like the boldness of #92. If thats not too confusing.
I know this sounds crazy it doesn't look like I want it. Can you send me 2 more options:
option 1: I want the font of the word "ROCK" like the one in #52. I don't know if can be bold or not but I like the K in this one and the R which seems more rounded in this font. Then I want the "The" and The "Of Greater Tulsa" just like the one in #92.
option 2: Same thing but without the line under "ROCK".
Dont worry I'm not going to drag this out. Once I can get this narrowed down we will make the decision and not drag it out over seven days. I appreciate all your help especially after I figured out how this process works. If you can get those 2 revisions and they are what we are looking for I think we will have it.
I like these. I have a one person who thinks the R looks like a P with a beard. Not saying I agree because I like these last 2 but can I see one more option? That would be one with an R that the leg coming down was closer to the first leg of the R. Much like the down leg in the K. I don't know if that makes sense or not to you. I could show you like he showed me but much harder to describe.
#133 I think is it. I'm sure this is easy but is it possible to see it in a color? Like a deep red or burgundy. Not sure about the whole thing or just "ROCK".
I know it all ends in a 12 hours or so but do you have any other cool ideas. This one is great and if nothing else I have narrowed this particular one #133 where everyone likes it too. However, I'm just not sure this is exactly what i'm looking for. I'm not disappointed and am willing to use this but it doesn't just grab me. I can't explain what I'm saying but was just wondering. You have been great to work with me so I understand if you think this is nuts. Nothing I have received has just moved me. This one is by far the best though. Let me know what you think. I know the more time you spend the less profitable it is to you too and I want you to be blessed by the process too.
I appreciate all your work on this logo. I know its the judging phase but I'll probably take the weekend to think about it all and show this to several other people. Any corrections, additions or changes will come Monday. If there are none we will seal this thing up.