The River of CalmLogo Design Contest

If there are any variations you would like to see (fonts, colors, adjustments to form, additions/subtractions, suggestions....), please ask. Happy to do.

Feedback and direction welcome.(Even knowing what doesn't work helps to hone things :-)

Thanks
C

If we can make the font darker or more bold (to stick out) that will be a nice addition. Thanks for your creativity - great job!

thanks for the feedback and direction. Please feel free to supply more!
C

You are doing a great job - and most of the people we polled like your entry. It is currently ranked #2 and only 1 in front of you. Is it possible to make the color of the tree pop more like the entry #1 or perhaps a kelly green or deeper green? Thanks so much - I will stand by for your update!

Ed

My address is ebazel @ thebazelgroup.com thank you

I will definitely be happy to try other options to the tree with different colors of green. But, just a reminder that I won't be able to upload any files unless I am at least temporarily in 1st at this stage of the contest. But it is definitely okay to get designers to upload other options, but you have to put that designer at least temporarily in first place while they are supplying those options. You can shift the designer (me, in this instance out of first again if you care to do so, once their upload is complete.So, if you do transfer me to first (you can then rerank files after you see new options if you wish), And, please message me so that I don't miss the opportunity. (and/or to indicate you have seen this message. Thanks.
C

Ed,
Ready to upload some options with different color greens, but again, need to at least temporarily be in first place to upload during this judging phase.
Thanks.
C

again,let me know if you'd like to see further changes (colors of anything) or adjustments in shape or spacing (the slogan might look better lowered a little bit?) or fonts. Happy to do.
C

Ok well since you asked - we are running neck and neck with yours and one other design. Can you possibly add a drop shadow to the text of #114? Either that or drop shadow the tree and water so it jumps off the page? many thanks for your work and communication it is not going to waste!

Ed

here's a couple of different options re: shadows (happy to do others, as well). Also did a tightening of the spread of letters (kerning) on the title so it fit more width-wise so it didn't extend beyond the letters and lowered the slogan a bit. Plus, i threw in one with another font--don't ask me why :-)

Feel free to ask for whatever else you would like to see!
C