I don't love the color scheme with the red and yellow together (do like the black and grey!) and I like the vintage feel of the girl's head...but something isn't working for me about the head. I like the creativity of this one though -- it is different from all the rest and that is what I like about it!
Yes, on second look I like that this one is really creative, but I'm thinking I don't want red and yellow to be a part of the logo. What else do you have in your head that is equally creative? :)