The Promise fmLogo Design Contest

the concept is rolling away the stone and the promise of life everlasting. feedback welcome. best of luck in your contest!

(This comment references Entry #6)

I love the concept, but it was too subtle for me at first. Can you show me a couple versions that highlight that a little more? maybe some light from the opening????

Now that I get it I love the idea of it - thanks for participating.

(this comment references entry #6)

a couple variations. do you have any preferences on the font? do you like the bold choice? or more scripted? thanks for the early feedback! it certainly helps in the process...

(This comment references Entry #15)

We like #6. Couple of thoughts; Could the FM be highlighted better and could the hole have some :light" the is subtle but noticable?
Just some ideas. The highlights on #14 seemed to go the wrong direction in my eye. Sorry.

that's quite all right! i know it was a departure, but i like to show options without littering your contest with dozens of entries. i will stick to the simplicity of #6. I will work to highlight the FM better. also try a couple different options on the light.

regarding the cross on the stone? yes? no? just curious. i know it was one of many changes, so i just wanted to ask. thanks for the honesty!

Not sure on the cross, maybe if it were a different green that the stone and was very subtle.
Thanks for the work.

using the deep gray as a secondary color to help show the light... for this one i left the cross. i could go either way on it. i think it helps to clarify, and it also helps to show that the stone isn't upright, that it's rolling or has been rolled. your thoughts on that aspect?

also changed the font on the other words to help highlight, especially the FM

(This comment references Entry #24)

What about a script FM tilted going up to the right? just a thought.

a different look at the concept.

(This comment references Entry #36)

These are looking good, could we see one with yellow rays that stay within the "O" but leave the tomb opening white? Thanks

i am working with the original design as well as you requested, but i had this one ready as well. a different view. i am working on increasing the proportions of the stone and the opening to better show the graphic.

(This comment references Entry #53)

incorporating the yellow in this newer look. i've been working with incorporating the burst in the old design, but it doesn't quite look right as of yet. i will continue on it though! in the meantime, a few adjustments for your consideration. any thoughts on this newer layout?

(This comment references Entry #66)

We would like to see a version of #36 with a capital P to start "Promise".

Also, I like the circle at the bottom of the "o" but would like to see a bright yellow on the inside with rays radiating up into the "o". Like light shining out of the hole, into the "o". I didn't like theother "o" design that moved the hole up to it's normal position. Having the base of the "o" as the hole is great.

Thanks.

thanks for continuing the feedback. just some subtle differences withing these three (#108, #109, #110) but all moving towards your suggestions. i was struggling to pull in the yellow, but i think these have a nice balance to them.

#110 is definitely more to what I was thinking. Maybe one more with thinner beams going out would be good to see. Thanks for your hard work on these.

#111 is much more what I had in mind. Thank you for the revision. I like the thinner rays on this one.