Hi, Thank you very much for considering my design. I just submit some entries based on your request, hope you love them. Update #84, #85, #85, #86, #87, #88. Let me know if you would like to see any further revisions...
the neck line of the woman in #88 is best, but with no flower. Theres something not quite right about the baby, not sure if its the shape of the babys head or if its the detail.
Also, what about bringing in a third character, perhaps a slightly more masculine character coming in from the other side. Together they would almost form a circle
something about the text is not working quite right either. It may just be the colours, Im not sure. What do you think about having the word naturally in a hand written font and perhaps at an angle? What do you think, give the text a little more visual appeal.
I like the couple in 113, but the blue is getting very heavy. Can you try it with a few different colours, perhaps a slightly lighter blue, or the greens and oranges, just to have a range. Also, any thoughts on improving the text?
in 113 the logo is also too big compared with the text.