Thanks for submitting a concept to my contest, I really appreciate your time and effort.
I see the sun rising over the water and looking like aperture blades - which very original.... However the colors here and the text placement isn't exactly what I'm looking for.
A couple of thoughts, can we try a yellow instead of a green for the sun/blades, also making it a little lower on the horizon?
Also for text placement:
line 1 - OUTER line 2 - BANKS line 3 - Photography School
Essentially move Banks above Photography school and square it up a bit?