The Offer AcademyLogo Design Contest

Here is some feedback from a jewellery friend that you might find useful to add in...
"I’d love to see your Ocean Blue as part of a wave crest making up part of the left side of the A.

Your life is spent in the peaceful tranquility of the beach life and that image itself brings peace and harmony to many people’s lives - as they/we too enjoy the calming nature of those images - and also the same place many people want to experience and go to..

To not have that element in these designs - Although they are gooood - still had me wanting to see YOU and your personality in the logo.

People invest time and money into you and your perspective on life and your experiences - so not trying to be negative at all -

But these logos say nothing about you - and that is who the OA is ‘from’ and ‘by’ - so that is the WHO we invest in - not a souless picture void of your personality.

Just my thoughts

Hi Michael,

Update proposal #259 and #260, let me know your thoughts.

Regards,
Jefry

Also, I like your TALUS logo. Something about that looks really nice

thicker :)

can we add some strength to it? Maybe ticker lines?

too simple and feels just like a letter. thanks for the idea :)

Nice design but looks a little like a car symbol.

Im putting this one back in the rankings. I like the clean look. I like how you climb the A then you break through the circle. I wonder what a circle break through at the top would look like too?

I don't mind this one. I like the subtle target feeling of the O too. The A feel a little sharp and not the same as the wording font

I think this one looks too much like a pie chart :(

design in mug :
http://prntscr.com/le2bxc
http://prntscr.com/le2cb5

design in tshirt :
http://prntscr.com/le2ckq

Update not centered, thin line with blue portion bigger.

regards,
Jefry

Update proposal, make line more thin (centered)

regards,
Jefry

Hi Michael,

Sorry for late respond I just arrive after driving 12 hour from other city and back to my city. Update proposal remove line inside A

Regards,
Jefry

Is there any chance of seeing this on a tshirt or mug? It brings them so much to life!

Thanks, but I like your other simpler designs better than this one. Thanks again

I like the colours, however I dont like the lines on the A. Thanks for all of your ideas!

Thanks, this looks nice.

Thank you - I really like the clever simplicity of this one. Can we try an off centred line making the blue piece larger therefore the A would appear smaller :)

update proposal with centered line and add slogan by Michael Maidens.

regards,
Jefry

update proposal, with thicker grey circle

Hi Michael,

Update proposal, in flat top part

Hi Michael,

Update proposal in flat color in dark navvy blue

regards,
Jefry

sorry this is doubble submission.

Regards,
Jefry

I wonder if there is a version of this logo - Offer Academy with a tagline of 'by Michael Maidens'

Is there a version of this that might be more off centre so it doesn't look like a pie chart?

I really like these logos. My concern is that I may be getting too close to another logo The Ask Method https://askmethod.com/

Thanks for this one :) can we see a variation with a flat top of the A?

I like the flat top of the A however I do not prefer the green and grey pieces inside the A - I'd rather the flat look

this looks very similar to another one you have posted. Is there a subtle difference I cannot see?

Can we try a version of this with a thicker grey circle so the O pops a little more

ahhh I see what you have done here with the lower case a... nice :)

Hi...

Thanks for feedback, update with grey outline represent secure

Regards,
Jefry

Also, I like how clever the O and the A are, but I wonder if it's too subtle so people miss the O and A all together

I like the look of this one. Is there a tweak to make it less like a pie chart... I like this direction

Hi Michael,

Update proposal #90 and #91

Regards,
Jefry

I'd like to see your thoughts on the focus more on the O for 'offer' more than the A for 'academy'... Offer is the main word or O and A equal... This logo is nice and strong, however the A dominates. Thanks

Thanks for mocking these up. It certainly brings them to life.

Hi Michael,

Thanks for feedback, I can't upload image with mock up in here that is violations, please see link for application sample on tshirt and mug http://prntscr.com/lcx9sz in tshirt
http://prntscr.com/lcx9jr on mug

Regards,
Jefry

Thanks for feedback, I can't upload image with mock up in here that is violations, please see link for application sample on tshirt and mug http://prntscr.com/lcx8qf in tshirt
http://prntscr.com/lcx8zf on mug

Regards,
Jefry

This one also had some great elements!

I like this one of yours also. Thanks!

I like the simplicity and cleverness of the logo and its strength. I can see this working in many places including a tshirt. I'd like to see a few more variations :)

Hi....

I submit new design proposal, let me know your thoughts,

Regards,
Jefry