Thanks and congratulations on winning :) Can we make some final tweaks to the font for the Academy? The letters feel a little too far apart and disconnected. Does that make sense?
Here is some feedback from a jewellery friend that you might find useful to add in...
"I’d love to see your Ocean Blue as part of a wave crest making up part of the left side of the A.
Your life is spent in the peaceful tranquility of the beach life and that image itself brings peace and harmony to many people’s lives - as they/we too enjoy the calming nature of those images - and also the same place many people want to experience and go to..
To not have that element in these designs - Although they are gooood - still had me wanting to see YOU and your personality in the logo.
People invest time and money into you and your perspective on life and your experiences - so not trying to be negative at all -
But these logos say nothing about you - and that is who the OA is ‘from’ and ‘by’ - so that is the WHO we invest in - not a souless picture void of your personality.
nice, can we see a version of this with THE OFFER in the same colour as the peak (I know this mixes up the letters and the words colour match, however the Offer process is climbing the the top and the academy is how they do it)
Can we see a version of this with colours flipped. I's like the focus to be on the OFFER more than Academy. I am a little worried this is an A centric logo...
I like the look of this one. Thank you. I'd like to see some variations of this too. I almost feel like there is a journey happening, clockwise from green to blue. Can we finish with blue at the top of the peak?
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"I’d love to see your Ocean Blue as part of a wave crest making up part of the left side of the A.
Your life is spent in the peaceful tranquility of the beach life and that image itself brings peace and harmony to many people’s lives - as they/we too enjoy the calming nature of those images - and also the same place many people want to experience and go to..
To not have that element in these designs - Although they are gooood - still had me wanting to see YOU and your personality in the logo.
People invest time and money into you and your perspective on life and your experiences - so not trying to be negative at all -
But these logos say nothing about you - and that is who the OA is ‘from’ and ‘by’ - so that is the WHO we invest in - not a souless picture void of your personality.
Just my thoughts
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