Hi, this is how I interpreted what you said! Doing all the text in a circular motion just wasn't working as it wasn't so easy to read (since this is going to be on a label, readability is very important). It can obviously be tweaked further since I'm rushing to meet the deadline, but with "the" in the blank space of the O it does give that impression of a crescendo as you read, and the eye naturally follows the curves of the O. Let me know if this works or not! Thanks!
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Thanks for your feedback! I would have to be in the top 5 to be able to submit revisions since the initial stage is now closed and I'll only have one hour to make any changes, after which only your #1 ranked logo will be able to submit entries. Just to be clear, you'd like me to make all the lettering follow the curves of the "o" swirl?
Hi,
Just wanted to break down my design for you:
My O is a climax... It starts slight and small and grows larger as it comes around (there's a pun there, not intentional but fitting! Lol ) I wanted a simple element that was sexy and portrayed that moment of incremental pleasure.
Thanks!
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Thanks for your feedback! I would have to be in the top 5 to be able to submit revisions since the initial stage is now closed and I'll only have one hour to make any changes, after which only your #1 ranked logo will be able to submit entries. Just to be clear, you'd like me to make all the lettering follow the curves of the "o" swirl?
A version where "THE" starts above, goes into the swirl "O" and then leads to the word "FACTOR"
Some more variations on this idea would be great!
Just wanted to break down my design for you:
My O is a climax... It starts slight and small and grows larger as it comes around (there's a pun there, not intentional but fitting! Lol ) I wanted a simple element that was sexy and portrayed that moment of incremental pleasure.
Thanks!