I like these alot! I like the interconnectedness but we should show a group of at least 5 as opposed to 2. If you could also show an action. I like the arrow but it only goes one way. see if the movement can connect each of the 5 characters to themselves and each other.
1.Please have more links of all different colors surrounding The Narrative Method. 2. In a separate link above and to one side put the slogan inside the link: "So Whose Story Are You Telling?"