The Mezzanine GroupLogo Design Contest

Good effort, but I like the other ones better!

another one

And here is another revision from me for your consideration.

Hi, I'm sorry, I made a mistake, the two lines above and under the mezzanine word idea is belong another designers, so I can't do that to my design. I 'm sorry, my mistake.

But her I try a version with another font.

great, could you put me at the first rank please? Since your contest is already in judging/selection mode, only the first ranked designer can still submit revision. Don't worry, you can always switch the rank whenever you want.

sure, let's have a look at that.

Hi, any other feedback for my design? I think of making putting 2 lines above and under the word mezzanine. What do you think?

small caps for "ezzanine".

Hi, this is with smaller "THE" and small caps for "ezzanine". What do you think?

Hi, I'll try, please wait

Also, can you try with small caps for the 'EZZANINE' section?

Forget what I said about lower-case, but how about small caps?

Can you reduce the size of 'The'

Have you tried this with the stylized M (as is) and with small gaps 'EZZANINE' or lower-case 'ezzanine'?

For this one, I try to make the increasing bars as the M, but since the letter M is in the beginning of the word, so I make it same color with the other words to avoid miss spelling to "EZZANINE"

And this is with some tweak to the design

Hi thanks for the feedback, here is the revision, a reversed color from previous design.

I love your creativity on the increasing bars in the N - I - N! Did you try inversing the orange and blue fonts (I can't recall if you submitted that) to see if it would be more powerful with the increasing bars in orange.

Hi, do you have any feedback for my design?

Thanks,
Edwin