I was thinking of an audience with all kinds of emotions... but will work on whatever you think might work! good to know what you like and do not like about designs to improve on them.
One comment from the group said the mask looked too much like a tooth. You (or others) might experiment with a profile mask on the right side of the M and the left side of the P facing each other. One happy and one sad. I would like to see how your design would change with that in mind..
OK I will play with this over the weekend when I have more time... thanks for the feedback.. love to work on this type project... I was on the board of our city rep company years ago... fun ...
Just to make sure on #11, I'm seeing the masks as actual parts of the long side of the M and P but as usual am interested in whatever creativity bubbles up.
On #38, that is kind of the idea, although I find the letters too blocky. What I really wanted to see was something like #11 (I like to colors and style), but the mask idea in profile and part of the letters. The masks would be facing each other, but sort of morphing out of the letters. In a fashion where the MP with masks could be a standalone part of the logo when needed. So you would have to create a new mask style. Makes sense, I hope.