Hello. Entry 4 & 5 Looking for something a little sharper. #1 A little too busy. Can you play with the colors and go darker. I love the inside - harts and pasley look. Maybe take that and make it into butterfly wings - take it and flip it for the bottom of the wings. Delete the other part. Change the font to a monotype corsiva, baskerville oldface or microsoft himalaya and have it over the butterfly. Add the words - make a big difference in the lives of cancer patients. I know that's alot of words but see if you can make it work.
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