Hello. Entry 4 & 5 Looking for something a little sharper. #1 A little too busy. Can you play with the colors and go darker. I love the inside - harts and pasley look. Maybe take that and make it into butterfly wings - take it and flip it for the bottom of the wings. Delete the other part. Change the font to a monotype corsiva, baskerville oldface or microsoft himalaya and have it over the butterfly. Add the words - make a big difference in the lives of cancer patients. I know that's alot of words but see if you can make it work.
Hi, thanks for the feedback. I hope that I understood what it was that you wanted me to do, please let me know if I haven't. Hope you like the new updated version.
Hello again. Close. :) Can you take the entire top wing and flip it to make the bottom wing? Change make to making and go darker/deaper with the color. Great job. Thank you so much!!!