Text still seems unresolved. Please keep working on it...it seems to crowded. Maybe but the text outside? or reduce size Oxbridge a bit so you have more space for text inside the circle. Thank you!
Please try to work on the text..hard to read the 15th year anniversary text...maybe reduce the size of the Liberty Bridge text and try increasing the 15th Year Anniversary.
The main bridge is too accurate and the river to abstract...try making the bridge more abstract somehow. Make both railings the same color. The colors still need work. Thank you!
The towers looks too wide...maybe draw them thinner...also please do not use brown color...just white/green/white. The 15th Year Anniversary maybe should be smaller font.
Please work on the bridge...it looks a bit deformed el river in blue goes between the towers...also there is a waterfall that you could use as source of inspiration.
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