Thanks for feedback, update proposal :
- #179 : add leaf to make more natural
- #180 : with different shape of combining globe and nest
- #181 and #182 : with different shape of combining globe and nest, with adding leaf in gold and green.
Thanks for feedback, update proposal make bird more big, I try explain concept behind my design. That not a just a nest, that reflect the globe/world that biggest nest and nature conservation. That way I don't make the nest like literally the nest. They has double meaning.
We love the idea of birds fledgling and leaving the nest. Congrats on taking a good idea and making it great. Feedback from the crew is more nest, larger birds. Metaphorically speaking, this is a winner. A little tuning... and little more elegance. The type layout is FANTASTIC - simple, and elegant.
Lovely graphic. But misses the metaphor mark. No eggs if birds are fledging... Remove the eggs and try again? Love the circle/cross shape, just get the message right.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #197, let me know your thoughts.
Regards,
Jefry
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Update proposal with maintain all text kerning #195 also make in red and black color combination #196, let me know your thoughts.
Regards,
Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal make bird in front and fix the Khosla kerning #183 and #184.
Regards,
Jefry
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By the way, I forgot to mention - the kerning on KHOSLA is off....
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal :
- #179 : add leaf to make more natural
- #180 : with different shape of combining globe and nest
- #181 and #182 : with different shape of combining globe and nest, with adding leaf in gold and green.
Regards,
Jefry
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* LOVE the birds in flight, birds fledging metaphor
* The nest looks a little like a cage...
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal make bird more big, I try explain concept behind my design. That not a just a nest, that reflect the globe/world that biggest nest and nature conservation. That way I don't make the nest like literally the nest. They has double meaning.
Regards,
Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #90, let me know your thoughts.
Regards,
Jefry
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I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, dont hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful.
Regards
Jefry