I like it a lot. Can I see a different font? I want it to kind of match the kettle more. A little more vintage looking. And can you put just a tiny bit more beans in there?
Updated version with a pile of coffee beans to the left of the kettle.
I have dropped the coffee bean from the word coffee because I think it was too much.
Can I see a version of this where there is a pile of coffee beans to the left of the kettle? Also, I really like the font used in the 2nd place logo. Are you able to view that?
I think I just don't like the color of the vines. Can i see it with a different color green? Maybe darker? And then a version of it in black and white. I do like how subtle it is.
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I made two new versions, #177 & #178, in which I've incorporated a vine.
In #177 the vine has been incorporated with the text and in #178 with the illustration.
Let me know your thoughts.
Thank you,
Mima
Are you able to make it look more seamless in the logo? Maybe desaturate the green or fade it? And make it go through the books or through the letter? I just dont want to draw too much attention to it
Here is the version with vine.
Let me know if you it's close to what you have envisioned.
If you want any changes please leave me your comments and I'll respond tomorrow morning.
You see I live in Greece and I am in a different time zone :)
Thank you!
And maybe make the books look a tiny bit more real. Also - can I see what a vine would look like growing between the logo? Starting from the right of the books? Hopefully that makes sense.. A green vine throughout.
Hmm, it looks too fake. It may need some shading and the book takes up too much space. Wondering if it looks better with the book laying more flat. Like tilting the book back more. I like the first verison better.
Ok I guess I didn't mind the steam in that last one. Can I also see what it would look like with an open book right underneath the kettle? Like the Kettle is actually sitting on top of it? Not sure if that'll make it look too busy or not.
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I am preparing the new color version.
Here are the color versions that I made, #193 & #194.
Let me know what you think.
Thank you,
Mima
Tomorrow I’ll make some drafts.
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I will make some new color versions.
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I made two new versions, #177 & #178, in which I've incorporated a vine.
In #177 the vine has been incorporated with the text and in #178 with the illustration.
Let me know your thoughts.
Thank you,
Mima
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No problem tomorrow I’ll rework the vine.
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Let me know if you it's close to what you have envisioned.
If you want any changes please leave me your comments and I'll respond tomorrow morning.
You see I live in Greece and I am in a different time zone :)
Thank you!
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I'll be glad to know your comments about my concepts #134 & #133 with a kettle and a bookmark.
Thank you,
Mima