I would like to see a version with less blurring and shadowing.
I like the flowers because it's very delicate and feminine but nothing about it says jewelry. I would like to see it with sparkles, scrolls, bows, diamonds...something to give it a very princessy and glamorous effect.
I love the pink you used!
I love this design! I'm really looking forward to seeing more of your designs!
Here is my second entry. I have removed the shadows and added a pink diamond with the floral effects coming from the lettering and a heap of sparkle to set it all off. I am eager to hear your thoughts.
The flowers are just not hitting me right. Could you maybe try swirly scrolls or just something different. Swirls, sparkles, tiarra, just something different.
Good work! It's just pulling the eye to the wrong direction and don't see the flowers fitting in for my brand.