I used "The Houston" in thinner font and "Back & Neck" in bold in my entry #26. I also used the same layout / arrangement of the text in my entry #29. So your request is not insulting at all.
I don`t know if I got your request right but here are four versions with that layout.
Regarding the size of the marks, I think the way they are offers a good proportion between the text part and the graphic part.
Where they will be used alone (without the text) they can be used as larger as needed.
Would like to see versions of these figures that suggest the range of afflictions chiropractic care can treat (whole body) since the name is specific. ie something that will bring in someone w ankle or knee pain.
I wanted the leaves to transmit the idea of a new beginning/new life. A person who is in pain feels like the life doesn`t make any sense. Once the pain is gone, that person feels like she/he has re-born and has got a new life.
I`m sorry I didn`t give you an explanation for it.
Here I played on the idea of a red light: on the left, the patient has a lot of pain. In the middle, the pain has diminished while on the right, the color changes to green and the patient doesn`t have any pain at all and if free to move.
Knowing you`re a 30 year old chiropractic doctor's office and you want to update your image, I think it`s best to keep at least a minimal reference to the old logo. Therefore, I updated your old logo maintaining the idea of diminishing pain. But I used calmer/softer colors rather than red (a gradient from blue to green) and I replaced the dots with something less confusing . Using leaves doesn`t make people confuse the shape with a spine.
Please let me know if you would like to see any revisions (fonts, colors, layout etc). Your feedback is always welcome.
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Then we could work together in private (using the e-mail) on the mock-up you have until you'll be completely satisfied with the final result.
Kind regards.
Thanks for your patience.
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I don`t know if I got your request right but here are four versions with that layout.
Regarding the size of the marks, I think the way they are offers a good proportion between the text part and the graphic part.
Where they will be used alone (without the text) they can be used as larger as needed.
Kind regards.
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I'd also like your artist's opinion about that rearrangement design-wise as well as if making the marks any larger would be good.
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It would be much easier to draw them in the style you prefer.
Thank you.
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If I didn`t, you can always use the "Markup tool" to annotate more precisely what you want:
https://help.logotournament.com/article/203-markup-tools-drawing-and-annotation
Kind regards.
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I wanted the leaves to transmit the idea of a new beginning/new life. A person who is in pain feels like the life doesn`t make any sense. Once the pain is gone, that person feels like she/he has re-born and has got a new life.
I`m sorry I didn`t give you an explanation for it.
Kind regards.
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I hope you`re having a wonderful day.
Knowing you`re a 30 year old chiropractic doctor's office and you want to update your image, I think it`s best to keep at least a minimal reference to the old logo. Therefore, I updated your old logo maintaining the idea of diminishing pain. But I used calmer/softer colors rather than red (a gradient from blue to green) and I replaced the dots with something less confusing . Using leaves doesn`t make people confuse the shape with a spine.
Please let me know if you would like to see any revisions (fonts, colors, layout etc). Your feedback is always welcome.
Thank you.