Yes for sure we can fine tune this after the contest is complete do not worry. When the contest is over i can share my personal data with you. Maybe we can fine tune all things live after the contest is complete, Skype or anyother mean, if you´re okay with that Shawn.
I was working during the night, i will just sleep now. I will be back again tomorrow.
We’re pretty much ready to select the winner. Will we be able to work together to fine tune the end result after we select the winning combinations here?
So i was out voted. The team wants to keep the H in white, and add the text welcome home in gold, then narrow things up a little. That way it matches the logo we placed in the number 1 ranking.
the only thing I dont like here is the profile between the H and the boarder, and the beveled edge on the H. I feel like we can create some depth using shadow and glare while also narrowing this up for use in small areas like on picture and as a standalone piece.
I saw the one you just designed but we Like the style of 246 the best. All in gold gradient. Let’s put the cities in white. Drop the boarder a little bit and just encompass the slogan. Does that make sense at all?
Yes using the main logo with the "H" works lovely in my opinion, and will make always the conection, also great to use as a standalone. Please check revisions done for your appreciation and let me know what do you think.
I love the other logo, you killed everyone else on here, but I still am not a fan of this standalone. The reflection kind if doesnt make a lot of sense and the H looks like a J and an F. What if we did something more traditional. Solid square that could go inside the logo if needed or anywhere else but with clean lines? Or we make the boarder around the "h" just like the big logo but smaller. Like the house and trees just really small?? What do you think? I know you dont love this logo, I can tell because you other work is exceptional and this is so so lol. What are you thoughts as a designer?
Could you try one where the cities are under the home team text and the slogan is inside the rectangle? I like the text and all that looks great! Just want to see what it would look like all encompassed.
Im a fan of this. I think we should make the slogan in a smaller font than the market center locations though. Other than that I think its super clean. The cursive "H" you created was inventive as a standalone but thats the only element left I feel needs work.
Everything is good for me except we also need that standalone "H" Logo and the cursive. !!! Great work. Im pretty happy with it. Ill be able to have my staff vote soon but I think were super close. Youve done a great job communicating and I have no doubt youll be able to get us what we want.
Please check my suggestions and let me know what do you think.
Also just a quick update in case you reply and i delay, because in Portugal is late and i will sleep in a few minutes, but i will be back again tomorrow and i can work on more revisions if needed, feel free.
This is the closest yet. I do prefer the profile of the boarder to be narrow like it was before. Also the text; "Spokane - Coeur D' Alene" isn't legible really, so what do you think about making a line break in the boarder to place the text?? And then a cursive font for the slogan?
Additionally, the standalone 'H' you have created is cool with the mountain cap incorporated since we are in the pacific NW But im thinking about putting that inside the logo before "The Home Team." Does that make sense.
Please check revisions worked for your review and let me know what do you think of them.
If you need anything else just let me know. I will be at work during the day, but as soon i arrive home from the agency i can work on changes if needed.
Things we like; the boarder around the home team text with the house and mountain is great. We just need to get the words - "Spokane - Coeur D' Alene" and then at the bottom of the logo outside the boarder we would like to add the slogan; The gold standard in real estate services.
Okay im back. I like this concept, but lets thicken the boarder so we can add Spokane - Coeur D' Alene in the like break at the bottom of the boarder like how you had the word team before.
Also lets crank out a few of those "H" designs. I love the reflection youve been able to create, the depth is fantastic, lots to like here. Our thoughts were that we would have a logo that could go on a sign or website background that would be the whole logo with the house and trees, with a rectangle enclosed logo inside so we essentially have three logos. One standalone logo like the H you created but in that square format, a banner type that includes the text and the standalone logo, and then the banner inside the boarder with the house and trees.
I´ve arrive right some minutes ago from work. I will send you my proposals soon.
We can´t really use other designers style, and i´m sorry for that Shawn, because of the website rules. Usually when designers follow other designs we can be banned, that´s why i´m sharing this. Hope you understaind.
You´ve been always great with the feedback. I will try to get the style be myself do not worry. I´ve some ideias, i will try to work on them and submit asap.
I like the shine and reflection, but we are trying not to steer to far from our original design. Lets narrow this profile up and get "the home team" in one line, just keep it an elegant narrow rectangle. See if you can incorporate some brushed texture and then what a lot of people are doing is creating a standalone logo for the H and keeping it on the left of the logo while keeping with the rectangle style.
Can you check out our profile again and read what we have updated? I was a little unsure of how this works and I feel like we gave unclear instructions. I think you are the best designer so far and would love to have you see the updated comments so you have a shot at winning here. I like that you understand the two-dimensional concept, with the reflection already down pretty well.
If we can turn the logo into a full rectangle with a darker gold infill and a lighter gold gradient boarder I would like to see what that looked like. As if the gold was chiseled into a gold brick. We like the reflective properties youve added to the badge, with the gradient in the black adding to the feel for depth. those are all qualities we are after, just not a huge fan of the badge style.
I like the realism in the gradient. I updated my profile with images and new instructions. We were a little unclear about how things worked when we started. If you could kindly look there and then proceed that would be greatly appreciated.
Take a look at our original logo. Ill tell you exactly what I want. We wanted the logo we had to be more polished and with a realistic gradient. You can see there is no shine or light reflection in our logo, no depth and no clarity. Take our logo an see if you can make it better. Love to hear what you have to say about it, and what you can come up with.
A banner concept where there is depth with the lettering, as opposed to a badge symbol would be more heavily considered. Like the images we provided of our logo, mixed with the simplistic banner style of the sets I chose in the selection process.
Again, really like your design style. We are looking to improve the design we have by making it more elegant, classy, and multi-dimensional. Having a simple design, modern, and realistic gradients is a must. We also need something that is going to provide us with a standalone concept, as well as a full logo.
I was using a logo with a wrong name. Here in Portugal is late, but tomorrow when i arrive home at night from work, i will try to thing on some improvements do not worry.
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Yes for sure we can fine tune this after the contest is complete do not worry. When the contest is over i can share my personal data with you. Maybe we can fine tune all things live after the contest is complete, Skype or anyother mean, if you´re okay with that Shawn.
I was working during the night, i will just sleep now. I will be back again tomorrow.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Submited revisions so you can appreciate with the team.
As always feel free to ask if you need anything more.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks again for your feedback.
Please check revisions bellow and let me know your thoughts:
- #256 | #259
- #255 - standalone logo 150x150
- #257 | #258
I´ve tried the building in white but doesn´t work well.
If you need anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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I appreciate your feedback as always.
I´m glad the team is happy with the logo.
Yes using the main logo with the "H" works lovely in my opinion, and will make always the conection, also great to use as a standalone. Please check revisions done for your appreciation and let me know what do you think.
If you need anything feel free to ask Shawn.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I also really like the logo. We done a great work together.
Please check revisions bellow and let me know your thoughts:
- #245 | #246
Anything else you may need just let me know please Shawn.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks for the nice words.
Yes i would go with a non cursive font too.
Please check my options and let me know your thoughts Shawn.
Anything else you may need just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I appreciate your feedback.
Please check my suggestions and let me know what do you think.
Also just a quick update in case you reply and i delay, because in Portugal is late and i will sleep in a few minutes, but i will be back again tomorrow and i can work on more revisions if needed, feel free.
I will leave you my timezone bellow in case you need to check:
https://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/portugal/porto
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks for the great feedback as always.
I´ve take advantage of my pause at the agency, and work on thes revisions so you can appreciate. Please check and let me know what do you think.
Anything else you may need just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Additionally, the standalone 'H' you have created is cool with the mountain cap incorporated since we are in the pacific NW But im thinking about putting that inside the logo before "The Home Team." Does that make sense.
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Thanks for the great updates.
Please check revisions worked for your review and let me know what do you think of them.
If you need anything else just let me know. I will be at work during the day, but as soon i arrive home from the agency i can work on changes if needed.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
Joao
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I´ve submited revisions for your appreciation, please check and let me know what do you think of them.
As always feel free to ask if you need anything else please.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thank you for your feedback.
I´ve arrive right some minutes ago from work. I will send you my proposals soon.
We can´t really use other designers style, and i´m sorry for that Shawn, because of the website rules. Usually when designers follow other designs we can be banned, that´s why i´m sharing this. Hope you understaind.
You´ve been always great with the feedback. I will try to get the style be myself do not worry. I´ve some ideias, i will try to work on them and submit asap.
I will focus on this one #49 and this one #175
Kindly Regards,
João
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I like the shine and reflection, but we are trying not to steer to far from our original design. Lets narrow this profile up and get "the home team" in one line, just keep it an elegant narrow rectangle. See if you can incorporate some brushed texture and then what a lot of people are doing is creating a standalone logo for the H and keeping it on the left of the logo while keeping with the rectangle style.
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I´ve arrive a little late, had to do extra hours at the agency.
Please check my submissions and let me know your thoughts.
If you like them we can start working on the effects if needed.
Thank you.
Kinldy regards,
João
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Example of reflective glow
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I appreciate your nice words on my skills. You´re are so great to work with.
I´m at the agency at work, but as soon i arrive home i will work on the changes do not worry. Just wanted to let you know.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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Submited revisions based on your comments, please check and let me know what do you think.
As always feel free to ask if you need anything else please.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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Please consider this one: #52
I was using a logo with a wrong name. Here in Portugal is late, but tomorrow when i arrive home at night from work, i will try to thing on some improvements do not worry.
Suggestions you may have feel free.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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