#25 Can you take the H and extend it through the roof as a chiminey? Take the hat and make it less dominant and try hanging it off of the top line that has the slogan in it. Also take out the gray shadow pointing down on the house and fence. Maybe a drop on the house and fence in gray.
#29 Make the fence back to the dark red with a slight drop shadow. Take the hat and extend the top line above the slogan and have the hat drape off the end. Tuck the slogan back up where it was. Can you take the H in Hogue and extend it up to form the chimney on the left side of the house rather than the chimney on the right?
#32 Take the gray back off the fence and house underneath. Extend the line above the slogan to the left just to the P and hang the hat off of the extension of the line. Take the left side of the letter H and extend it where it is part of the chimney.
#33 Move the H to the left a little so the top part of the h looks more like a chimney and not touching the roofline. Also dangle the hat off the bottom line
#61 #62 Look at the one on white and copy the thickness of the outline around the H to be the same size on the outline on the black probably 1 point. Raise the left side of the H up just to the apex of the roof so the serif on the top of the H does not touch the roof. Let me know when done so I can switch you into number one position so you can upload them.
I tried to make a design according to what described CH, my English not very good and also less able to translate accurately. I am ready to send my design (rev # 61) thanks Erwin72