Hi Glendon - love this version. Could you try two more things...
1 - a version with the 'The' above the Hip part of the HipCheck - so the logo says 'The HipCheck' It can be smaller and might fit best right above the 'Hip'
2 - a version where the vertical line of the K is extended slightly, and a flag added to turn it into a flagstick. That gives us the visual of the ball heading towards the flag.