I think the answer might be somewhere in between these two.
I like more people, the (softer) heart -maybe even encompassing the words(?), the spruced up o ( I like it, but it might be too much-let's try).
I don't like the overwhelming THE take note of the next ranked cleanliness and balance in the words. That the leaf now looks like a leaf...it should maybe look like a halo-leaf (?)
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I like more people, the (softer) heart -maybe even encompassing the words(?), the spruced up o ( I like it, but it might be too much-let's try).
I don't like the overwhelming THE take note of the next ranked cleanliness and balance in the words. That the leaf now looks like a leaf...it should maybe look like a halo-leaf (?)
Thank you!
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