I made two revisions with two shades of gray. As for the pointy lines - I've noticed that other designer was using them so if I did the same it could be perceived as copying his ideas.
Bird looks perfect. Anyway you could do all of the text in a grey and/or silver color? We're curious how it would look. Also the "THE" text doesn't seem to match the Grit Foundation font? Also could you have the lines above Grit Foundation maybe come to a point? Not sure how that would look but curious.
Thanks for your feedback. I've prepared requested revisions with different layouts and some pop-up colors included. I've also switched to font of your choice. I've slightly modified "G" to make it more distinct.
Hi thanks for submitting. We like this. It took us a minute to see the G and the F in the wings but when we realized that, it was very cool. Can you restack the words in a couple of different layouts in dark grey or silver? We would like to see THE smaller. Can you add some highlight to the logo to give it some dimension as well? Thanks and we look forward to your submission.
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This is so far our favorite one.