#28 is good I like the absract look however you represented the feel of golf but not the norm. Im not sure about the colours to lime green. Maybe try the logo in more of a dark colour as we print alot on White, and Black shirts and golf bags.
Our brand is representing an upper class establishment like a clubhouse not just an indoor golf bar. We have members only clubs, and we will be branding the logo as well as the name so we want to make sure when people see the logo alone they also know the name.
Please remember when making revisions to stay away from any type of shading because when we do embroidery this does not work
#91 is good. Can we tweak and can I get a look at trying the following. Golfer above text with the swing (same as #91 but the line of #89) Then the text of Academy not so long but with a left and right line similar #58
I also prefer the starting position of the arc of #90 but finishing of #91 but the right foot line of #89 if this makes sense