Entry #5 I like the logo however the lime green needs to go. darker shade of green Can you please give me another look of text, I do like the look of the text in #12 looks very professional upper class
#23 green is better can you move the golfer silhouette above the text. I would like the logo to be the same height as width for shirt and hat printing. Also golf bags do not print well in long lengths.
I like the text however can you work on making it more representing a high end establishment, class, prestige. A platinum badge or gold stars is great as it represents awards and levels of excellence.
Also remember that the text will be just as important as the logo when separated as we are building a brand awareness thru visual when separate. (eg Mercedes Benz symbol is known by the 3 star circle / Apple by the logo) Can you do something abstract around the silhouette maybe? A swoosh in the shape of a G that looks like a swing plane.
thanks for the feedback.. as my primary business is embroidery of wearables and printing on promotional items, I know you will need alternate version/layouts for different medium.. this can be provided.
I have spoken with my colleagues and they like #30 however the census is that the text looks jumbled. Maybe place 'THE over the G' try a different text for the word 'academy' maybe Zapfino or something similar.
Also is there a way you could maybe make a swing arc around the golfer
The word Academy needs to be just a little tighter same class of look in text ignore previous text comment not as wide as the word Golfer's. Also can you try making the Golfer's BOLD Text.
Could you shrink the word academy and add lines on either side of the word academy, on #96 could be 2 revisions one straight line the other pointed line.