Entry # 20, better font for "the gifted program" that font is too cheesy. We want something that will catch attention and looks gritty and has some edge to it.
Entry # 12 & 16: font needs to be more aggressive, edgy and grity. Take out the girly lines hanging off the objects. For the buildings that you are using make them look like real buildings, empire state, etc. Don't have a building be a speaker (# 16) it looks really bad. I want to think hottest music in NYC, what does that look like!
Entry # 17 and 11: take away the lines that point out from the object like a shinning sun, thats awful. I like the city objects but lets build around that, make it seem more edgy, with gritt. I like how to the hand is in different places in each one, lets keep that diversity. Also the hand doesnt need to be an actual hand, it can grow off a letter and just have three fingers grow from the letter or object.
Entry # 13, get ride of the squigley lines coming off the words, make this seem much more urban and hard. This looks way too much like a kids fantasy novel, like harry potter. Think N.W.A. the rap group, or DMX these type of hard logos.