We like the ideas. Try changing the colors of the words "the" and "pointe" to add a little more color. Also try changing the scarf and pole colors. Maybe add some icicles somewhere for effect. Thanks!
Hi. The more we analyze your drawing, the more we are thinking that the penguin is looking a little too much like a duck because of the beak. Can you change it up a little to make it look more like a penguin? And, maybe change the "script" letters to a different font.
Thank you for continuing to work with us. Here are some additional changes we would like to see: - change the color of the ice cream and remove the cherry. - put icicles along all of the letters, not just some of them - we like the letters "freezing" in entry #10 the best - try putting the penguin, the sign, and the ice blocks above of the letters "the freezing pointe" - we definitely want ear muffs (as you had in entry #11) Thank you!