OK, it is looking better, thank you. I'm still wanting the hat to look a little more feminine, though that may not be helpful:/ and I'd like the blue color to be more aqua/turqouise, a little brighter. You could look at the screenshot of the home page of my website that I uploaded initially for the color. Thanks.
OK, the hat is better but still too boxy & masculine looking, maybe try putting the hat at a side angle so it's not so boxy. Also, GROUP in black stands out more than everything else now so switch FOREHAND to black as well and in the slogan underneath keep YOU black and make Move black and change the other words to aqua please.
Thank you for feedback,
Updated colors, #71, #72, #73
For hat band in red, another designer already used it, We are respect another designer concept.
But if red hat band is your idea, I can do that.
I kinda like this though the hat needs to be a fedora & over all this needs more personality & color. Darker aqua color and maybe FOREHAND in red & the hat band in red, then try YOU in black then put beForehand together as one word and change the Forehand part to black as well.
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Let me know if more revisions needed. Thanks.
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Updated colors, #71, #72, #73
For hat band in red, another designer already used it, We are respect another designer concept.
But if red hat band is your idea, I can do that.
Rgds,
Kingsha
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