The Focus DocLogo Design Contest

I love this design as well. I could really go either way between this and the current number 1. I couldn't rank this in the top 5 for reasons of having 5 finalists. Same comment applies here for "THE" perhaps being in another color?

This looks fantastic. What do you think about the light bulb glow to be in more of a yellow shade? Also what about maybe highlighting THE in another color?

okay

The puzzle connectors would likely have to be bigger in this scenario

I like where you are going with this. What if the origins of the puzzle pieces were to originate from the parts of the O?

What if the lightbulb was a bit simpler (no filaments inside) and maybe in a shade of yellow or orange-yellow?

The reason the person worked in my last logo was because, the person acted as a Y in one letter.

my new favorite, though I'm still not sold on the middle of the O. What if we were to use a lightbulb or puzzle pieces coming together?

I think the color contrast is really needed for the brain (or whatever object might be in the center of the O.

I like where you are headed with this overall. I appreciate that "THE" is in thinner sharper letters now. I'm still hung up a little on the brain. This one is probably too detailed to resonate on most people. Maybe there's a middle ground for the 2 brain depictions?

I'm also open to seeing other objects in the middle of the O that might signify mental health, the mind, etc.

You're right and you initial artistic intuition is far better than mine, the O does need to have multiple colors to it.

Hands down my favorite thus far (overall and from you). I think the font is sharp but elegant, the brain is glowing (suggesting an improvement or change).

My only critique here is the shape of the brain, can that be refined at all? I'm also wondering what the O would look like with different colors or if it were a single color.

You have some very impressive skill and vision.

My one critique here is that the font overall is a bit too bold. I do like how the brain stands out.

I love how you've replaced both O's with a symbol. Perhaps we can use something that's more indicative of mental health, the brain, mind or a person?

My concern with the current symbol is that it looks very similar to an eye and could thus then suggest that focus in this case is referring to an eye doctor.

My only other critique would be the use of a cleaner font.