I love this design as well. I could really go either way between this and the current number 1. I couldn't rank this in the top 5 for reasons of having 5 finalists. Same comment applies here for "THE" perhaps being in another color?
This looks fantastic. What do you think about the light bulb glow to be in more of a yellow shade? Also what about maybe highlighting THE in another color?
I like where you are headed with this overall. I appreciate that "THE" is in thinner sharper letters now. I'm still hung up a little on the brain. This one is probably too detailed to resonate on most people. Maybe there's a middle ground for the 2 brain depictions?
I'm also open to seeing other objects in the middle of the O that might signify mental health, the mind, etc.
Hands down my favorite thus far (overall and from you). I think the font is sharp but elegant, the brain is glowing (suggesting an improvement or change).
My only critique here is the shape of the brain, can that be refined at all? I'm also wondering what the O would look like with different colors or if it were a single color.
I love how you've replaced both O's with a symbol. Perhaps we can use something that's more indicative of mental health, the brain, mind or a person?
My concern with the current symbol is that it looks very similar to an eye and could thus then suggest that focus in this case is referring to an eye doctor.
My only other critique would be the use of a cleaner font.
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I'm also open to seeing other objects in the middle of the O that might signify mental health, the mind, etc.
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My only critique here is the shape of the brain, can that be refined at all? I'm also wondering what the O would look like with different colors or if it were a single color.
You have some very impressive skill and vision.
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My concern with the current symbol is that it looks very similar to an eye and could thus then suggest that focus in this case is referring to an eye doctor.
My only other critique would be the use of a cleaner font.