Entry #2: the color scheme is on point but the overall look and feel is too corporate and not playful enough. Although we are looking to expand to a larger audience, our core competency is in the children event world, so we want to come off as fun and engaging in our logo.
Entry #3: I appreciate the incorporation of stars/glitter, but again it feels to corporate and boxed in. I'm also not sure what the icon above the flower is supposed to represent. I like the idea that the icons show that we offer a variety of services, but the use of actual icons feels stale.