Thank you for the comments and great rank! Can you be a little bit more specific? What do you mean exactly the "more proportionate" thing? So you mean that other words must to be a little bit bigger than they was? (Then "the eye" doesnt fit in that place between letters J&L)
What I mean is that there is too much of a difference in the size of the upper line and the lower line. I like the "JEWELRY" of #80 and the "THE EYE OF" of #79. Because even small - it can be read.
#80 - I dont like the sparkle on the O - it is too detached from the text. #23 - remains the best - but Jewelry should still be slightly smaller compared to "the eye of"