I appreciate your feedback very much. I have my updated version posted. Hope you liked. I will try my best until you get exactly what you're looking for
Well the only thing I am thinking is that "THE" gets lost a little because the "R" is directly under it. Could we tighten up "REAL ESTATE a little so the "R" is indented a bit? Also, please add a small dot before and after the word "ENERGY", but in the middle, so they don't look like periods. I think a little separation between those words is needed to people don't ready them like a sentence. Thanks again for all your efforts!
Thanks for updating. If you could take away the half moon above the city that would be great. It would make the design look a lot smoother. Also, I would like to see what it would look like with a small dot in between EXPERIENCE ENERGY RESULTS, rather than the line. I would like to compare the two.
Can we tighten up #67 a little more? Can we change the font in EXPERIENCE ENERGY RESULTS so that the letters are a little closer together? I feel they all blend together and get lost. Also, can we take away some of the smaller buildings in the skyline, mainly the 6 buildings in from the right. Then make the building to the right of the Zakim Bridge more taller, especially the one with the 2 pillars as that would be the Federal Reserve Building. Then also add a couple more on that side and re-center the whole skyline over the design once modified. Also put a little more distance between the 2 tall buildings above the "O". Those signify the Prudential which is on the right with the antenna on the roof, then the Hancock to the left of it. There should be a little more space between them. I'm just trying to authenticate the Skyline a little more as Boston's. Also, this could just be my eyes, but is the line under "REAL ESTATE" a smudge longer on both sides compared to the line above "DIGIORGIO TEAM"?
Thanks again for your time and effort. We are almost there. Can't wait to see the final updates! Greg
Thanks again for your great feedback! I have my revised design posted. Please feel free to ask if any adjustment still needed
The line between the company name are exactly in the same length but i've try to balance it more, hope it look more better now and i have change the font for EXPERIENCE ENERGY RESULTS but i try keep it a bit bold in case you want to embroidery the logo in the future
Wow nice job with #71! 2 more things. The furthest building on the right kind of looks like a vase. Can you make it like the left side where you taper it down? So you would increase the size slightly for the 2nd one in from the right, then make the one on the end a smidge shorter. Also, could you smooth or straighten out the left side of the Prudential building, which is the 4th one in from the right? Thanks!
Couple more things. I just noticed that the Zakim Bridge was behind the buildings. It actually needs to be in front of them. Can we add the other half of the Zakim Bridge, center it, then put the buildings behind the bridge? Everything else it perfect! Thanks again! Greg
Thanks again for the feedback, I have my updated designs posted.
Just for your information, my basic idea is using Silhouette of the buildings in Boston like shown here #80, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Silhouette here is description of the Silhouette. I used this concept in my designs to keep it simple and elegant
You are totally right! The Silhouette definitely looks better. When you put the buildings in front of the bridge it just totally takes away from the Boston skyline. The way you had it in #73 was the way to go. However I still think we need to add the other half of the suspension bridge to #73. However it need sot be further apart than in #83 for example. I would recommend putting one half of the Zakim bridge over the "I" and O" in DIGIORGIO, and the other half over the "T" and "E" in TEAM.
#86 was the closest. I was trying to get the left side of the bridge closer to the first "IO" in DIGIORGIO. Sorry as I have a lot of vowels in my name, lol.
Ok my fault, but I think I had you separate the 2 Parts of the bridge a little too much. I would prefer if the 2 parts of the suspension bridges were a little closer in #88, and the taller buildings to the side of them. Can you move the left side if the bridge to be directly over the "R" in DIGIORGIO, then mine the Federal Reserve building and the other tall building next to it over to the left of the bridge. Then move the right side of the bridge over so it's directly over the "O" and "T", then move the Prudential and the other tall building just to the right of that. Sorry as it's tough to describe all this over email. I'm trying my best and I appreciate all you hard work.
It was a very hard decision, but I ended up going with another design. I wanted to thank you for all your hard work that you put into my logo. It was very much appreciated!