The talk bubble concept is something that does not interest me. I like how these are more masculine than the others. Can you add "With Mike and Jay" to the design? I ultimately want something demonstrating rawness, no boundaries. It needs to look good on wearable merchandise and be simple enough to be embroidered. A unique "D" is very important to the overall design.
You are on to something. Numbers 23 and 24 demonstrate some motion, which is cool. It makes make me wonder if something distinctly Detroit could be added ... A wheel or tail pipes ... While still keeping the overall design simple and clean.
21 and 22 are good and simple too. Can you play with the D a bit and give several other options of D designs? Thanks for your efforts.