Thanks again for the feedback. I've made revisions along these lines. When it comes to font - up to now I used serif fonts to match the feel of the icon. The only simpler font that comes to mind is san-serif so I've used it in some of the recent revisions. I also removed hollow places from the lettermark as you suggested. In some versions there are straightened curves of the big "T" to farther simplify the overall feel.
If you think that some of the versions are closer to what you expect please let me know and we can tweak them farther.
Are we able to go back to the previous tip of the T (as in the first drafts?). I essentially was just after you filling in all the gaps inside the symbol so it looked less like a sword. Didn't mean to change the bottom tip. Sorry for the miscommunication.
Also, if we could fill in the two little gaps at the top of the symbol, where the T and C's meet. It may look better as it is now, just wanting a comparison.
I appreciate the use of the new font for the name. Are there other fonts that look at little "cleaner" and simpler? I'm not sure how to describe it correctly. Less standard keyboard font style and more modern / professional.
The helix is nice and I'm now not sure as to which is better, the snake or the helix.
The only other refinements will be from looking at different colour options and mixes, which I hope are easy to do. (it's purely just me being currently undecided as to if I like the grey, or the black, or a mix, etc, so I will know when I see it)
But we are definitely getting to something that I like.
I appreciate the time you are taking to make revisions. Thank you.
Thank you for your detailed feedback. Medieval feel came from your request to have it look like a tattoo. If you prefer it to look more modern I can do it of course. Adding helix will go along these lines. Othjerwise, you don't have to be afraid about copying Aesculapius as this is my original implementation of this popular theme. We are forbidden to use any clip art.
It's 1 A.M. here so I will be able to provide revisions tomorrow morning.
I really do like the T and C symbol you have done, this is the best interpretation of what I would like that anyone has ever produced.
I do also like the curves of the snake wrapping around the symbol.
Maybe if the Symbol was a solid colour so it didn't look like a sword. Still keep the same outline, just maybe colour it in.
I like the wrap around shape of the snake. But again, think it might be too much like the medical symbol (want to use it as inspiration, not direct copy)
If we can keep that shape and theme, but maybe do something different with it? Or maybe like the helix of a DNA.
Overall, really like this one. But if we could possibly make the look a little more modern, medical and professional and less swords and medieval, it would be fantastic.
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If you think that some of the versions are closer to what you expect please let me know and we can tweak them farther.
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Maybe colour in the just at the cross roads of the T and C's.
Change the font as previously described.
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Also, if we could fill in the two little gaps at the top of the symbol, where the T and C's meet. It may look better as it is now, just wanting a comparison.
I appreciate the use of the new font for the name. Are there other fonts that look at little "cleaner" and simpler? I'm not sure how to describe it correctly. Less standard keyboard font style and more modern / professional.
The helix is nice and I'm now not sure as to which is better, the snake or the helix.
The only other refinements will be from looking at different colour options and mixes, which I hope are easy to do. (it's purely just me being currently undecided as to if I like the grey, or the black, or a mix, etc, so I will know when I see it)
But we are definitely getting to something that I like.
I appreciate the time you are taking to make revisions. Thank you.
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It's 1 A.M. here so I will be able to provide revisions tomorrow morning.
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I do also like the curves of the snake wrapping around the symbol.
Maybe if the Symbol was a solid colour so it didn't look like a sword. Still keep the same outline, just maybe colour it in.
I like the wrap around shape of the snake. But again, think it might be too much like the medical symbol (want to use it as inspiration, not direct copy)
If we can keep that shape and theme, but maybe do something different with it? Or maybe like the helix of a DNA.
Overall, really like this one. But if we could possibly make the look a little more modern, medical and professional and less swords and medieval, it would be fantastic.
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Although it tends to look a little "medieval"
Might need a change of font to something a little more modern / corporate / professional?
Am not sure about the snake, although I do like very much that there is something going on with the symbol besides just the T and C's