Hi there and thank you so much for what you sent. I picked no 10 as your best because it is the lightest. But they all seem a bit heavy to me. Here are some suggestions
1. Make the circular band thinner
2. Modernise the people - something suggestive but not too much detail
3. Lighter typestyle - century gothic or something more rounded and modern (see www.breathbliss.com)
PLease give it another go!
Antonio