Nice work. Can you make the cross a finer line 'more subtle'? Maybe by bringing the shapes closer together toward the center. We want to emphasize the C a bit more, Can you try in the burgundy you have or add an edging to the letter.
b. Can you also try running The Cathedral Group in a single line.
Thanks Max... One more thought. Jesus is the chief-cornerstone of the Church and the cornerstone is the first foundational piece laid for a new building or cathedral.. If you look at cornerstones of Cathedrals, maybe you can do something subtle of the architectural elements on your lower green shape.. Maybe you can borrow the shape of the base of St. Veronica Statue which has great meaning; has to be subtle though.. http://www.sacred-destinations.com/italy/rome-st-peters-basilica/photos/eosa_076p
Nice work. Can you make the cross a finer line 'more subtle'? Maybe by bringing the shapes closer together toward the center. We want to emphasize the C a bit more, Can you try in the burgundy you have or add an edging to the letter.
b. Can you also try running The Cathedral Group in a single line.
New colors were not strong enough. Open to other suggestions, otherwise happy with 177 as is. Would like to see it on a colored or black background however.
on 177 try a slightly thinner font. nothing too significant. Looking for something a bit more sharp and crisp