love the layout of the writing and the font but the symbol overwhelms the title. We are interested in an integrated symbol with the title if possible. We love the concept of an all-encompessing sphere representing the room, and the breathing represented by the organic matter inside, but the composition doesn't quite appeal to us. The illustrative shading on the symbol is great, though.
Also, we love the color combination, and appreciate your color pallette choice. Can you give us two paths, one with these colors, and one with a grey-brown and soft blue pallette?
I love love love love what you have done but as we look more and more, it seems a bit too playful and childlike. The symbol is amazing, but as we scrutinize our final choices, we would like to see the symbol more streamlined.
I hope we are not being too confusing. Thank you very much
Ok, just submit some new concept for you... simplicity & streamlined.. My designs still exactly represent the room...the breathing room...with personal attention. hope you like them..