We really like the integration of the symbol throughout the title. However, it appears a bit too flowery for what we want. Composition, spacing, font, colors, and layout are great, but can we please see a totally different direction with the symbol itself?
Ultimately, we hope that our symbol can stand by itself without the writing(like the Nike swoosh) so that we could use it on apparel or letterhead. One artistic application that we really enjoy is color gradation or shine. I do not know if that is the right vocabulary as I am not the designer, but I hope you know what I mean. Thank you for your time.