The originality of your symbol appeals most to us about #121. However, it is a bit too flowery for what we want. The colors of #121 are too stark and too bold. We do not want white or black writing. Also, we are interested in a lower case font.
As far as layout goes, we would like the one line of #121, but would love to see a variation like the breathing room
Ultimately, we would love to see your creativity with a symbol that is more directly integrated with the writing itself, but could stand alone if need be(like the Nike Swoosh). We want to eventually use it on apparel or letterhead.