The Breathing Room Pilates and YogaLogo Design Contest

I'm uploading my design alternatives.

(This comment references Entry #5)

The symbol in #5 is the best, but still not it. We would prefer to emphasize "The Breathing Room", and have "pilates and yoga" as a subscript, which could be taken away and still have a good composition. Also can you integrate the symbol into the title a little more?

Thanks!

We like the stacked version #11 a little better. The font sizing is better. but is a little too plain. We like how it is not block lettering, but could you give us a few alternatives to see some difference. Also, the symbol is too static. Can you add a bit of fluidity and complexity to it?

Thank you for responding so quickly.
Unfortunately, the symbol may not be right for us. Can you try a totally different direction? The square inside a square seems to cause the static nature.
As for the font layout, it looks better. Maybe try combining the "Breathing" and "Room" in one color. Also, the line coming from "The" seems to off-balance the composition. I like the line, can you try just by itself to the left of all three words?

Here my choice. using the initials B and R of Breathing Room, to create a person.

(This comment references Entry #41)