Really like #23 can you make it just 'pole dancing studio' for a better fit? And the 'brass room' more prominate/bolder? Perhaps the text bigger and the image slightly smaller?
Using #29 can you try a silhouette of a pole dancer doing a move on the pole perhaps that puts her or a leg in the whitespace above the 'ss' in 'brass', instead of the cliche lean-against-a-pole which can come off as a bit like a stripper.