The Boarnet TeamLogo Design Contest

Could you try this design with a black background and red writing, also a black background with grey writing.

I could but only the 1st ranked designer can submit revisions. If you would set me as 1st before you decide on a winner, I can submit a revision, then you can re-rank before for you select a winner. I'll be watching, Thanks for the feedback....and hopefully I get the chance to make the revision.