The Blueprint Men's SummitLogo Design Contest

I like it, but meant something different. I realize I wasn’t entirely clear. I’m looking for one shape to be inside the other shape. But close so it appears as if a white line separates the two shapes. Is this more clear? Thanks!

How about this?

How about this?

How about this?

How about this?

This is better. Thank you! How would this look with a double line for the shape instead of a single line?

This is better. Thank you! How would this look with a double line for the shape instead of a single line?

Hi there. We like this approach but are concerned about readability. How can we make it more readable? Also need to add the tagline ‘from the block to the boardroom.’ Finally, the black version you submitted had double lines. That made the octagon logo more pronounced. It gets lost with the white version here. Let’s see some alts based on this feedback please. Thanks!