The dog's face looks like it is frowning (Maybe just an up turn at the end or getting rid of the down turn and adding the upturn.
If you could me the heart up a bit from the buildings so it stands out a bit more would be great
If you can look at pictures of the boston skyline, you'll see some very distinct bbuildings.
Here are some:
The custom house
John Hancock building
John Hancock tower
International Place
The Old north Church
The Exchange building
and we're known for our brownstones
Also can you make "THE BLACK DOG" a little smaller? I see why you increased the font size, but I feel like at that large the details in the font are not as pronounced. Or if you have a different font, I'm open to that
Thank your for the revision. I'd like some more detial in the face. Also we are boston based and have some distinct buildings that I think would be better than non-boston buildings.
Also I the heart is a little too low as it almost blends into the building below.
Thank you for considering my work, sure i already have but can't submit on this selections phase, only 1st can submit new entry, can you please to change first..
and i will work in first morning
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As the contest is in final stage would you like to see any revisions? Please let me know.
Best regards
Lumaku
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please check new revisions #161
If there's any changes feel free to let me know
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The marks I put in are not in the exact location, but shown to give you an idea.
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I think you have the wrong john Hancock (we have 2 and the one you used is the one from Chicago and none of the buildings make me think of boston.
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The dog's face looks like it is frowning (Maybe just an up turn at the end or getting rid of the down turn and adding the upturn.
If you could me the heart up a bit from the buildings so it stands out a bit more would be great
If you can look at pictures of the boston skyline, you'll see some very distinct bbuildings.
Here are some:
The custom house
John Hancock building
John Hancock tower
International Place
The Old north Church
The Exchange building
and we're known for our brownstones
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Also I the heart is a little too low as it almost blends into the building below.
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Thank you for chances. As the contest is in final stage i just uploaded new variations please check #106 #107 #108
Best regards,
Lumaku
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I had them change the stage so you should be able to submit the revisions
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As the contest is in final stage would you stil like to see any revisions? Please let me know.
Best regards
Lumaku
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and i will work in first morning
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I just trying to make an alternative designs for optional with horizontal layout.
If there's any suggestions feel free to let me know.
Best regards,
Lumaku
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On this phase i created a few designs, would you mind to check please..
If there's any changes or suggestions feel free to let me know.
and your feedback always welcome.
Best regards,
Lumaku