I have done alterations to the leg...
At more of an angle from the previous, which I think gets around the 'hurt' look.
Uploading 2 variations. Let me know what you think.
I think the leg might be a little long as well. I'm not sure if you have a dog, but when I see the leg, it reminds me of when my dog hurt her leg and less like she is giving me her paw.
The smaller leg may be the answer to the "hurt leg" look.
Thank you for the revision
Maybe just a bit more detail on the aw that is up and the heart/ leg detail seems a little off and the raised leg looks like it is smaller/ atrophied
If you can move the heart inward a bit more (if you need to make it smaller, I'm ok with that).
Also a little more detail in the front paws will alleviate the "horse" look.
One quick favor. If you could just send over one revision that is much easier. It's a bit much to look at all of the revisions on my laptop as we can only open one design at a time so I spend a lot more time trying to figure out which one is the closest to make comments on than anything else.
The heart is a little too close to the border and if you can make the front paw/ leg just seems off. Maybe too hugh? and the paw looks like a horse's hoof?
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At more of an angle from the previous, which I think gets around the 'hurt' look.
Uploading 2 variations. Let me know what you think.
I do have a dog but she is not great
at posing for me!
I think the leg might be a little long as well. I'm not sure if you have a dog, but when I see the leg, it reminds me of when my dog hurt her leg and less like she is giving me her paw.
The smaller leg may be the answer to the "hurt leg" look.
Will send adjustments tomorrow.
I think the leg where the dog is giving the paw maybe too high? Something about how it comes to the body just does not seem right anatomically.
Also can you move the collar up a bit- if you want to do a separate one for each, I'm ok with that.
Thank you again for the revisions.
Maybe just a bit more detail on the aw that is up and the heart/ leg detail seems a little off and the raised leg looks like it is smaller/ atrophied
Also a little more detail in the front paws will alleviate the "horse" look.
One quick favor. If you could just send over one revision that is much easier. It's a bit much to look at all of the revisions on my laptop as we can only open one design at a time so I spend a lot more time trying to figure out which one is the closest to make comments on than anything else.
Will look at alterations.
The heart is a little too close to the border and if you can make the front paw/ leg just seems off. Maybe too hugh? and the paw looks like a horse's hoof?
I have a message into them to get it done.
I would like the same font I have, the eyes, the heart on the chest and and less "sharp" lines on the dog (the leg portion).